Monday, October 1, 2007

Mrs. Dalloway's unconcious

What is with this stream-of-conciousness...unconciousness is more like it...either that or ALL of the characters are sharing the same mind, same thoughts, same everything....use a period now and again...let us know when the speaker has changed...heck, I'd take a well placed colon even...it's annoying isn't it...having one super long, run-on sentence...yeah, it is...and I hate it too, Mrs. Dalloway.

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